PIRATE :: Aphrodi Kura

[Aphrodi Kura]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, width: 508px; height: 740px; background-image:url('http://i.imgur.com/xvJao.png');] [/style] [style=margin-top: -100px; margin-right: 50px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 20pt; text-align: right; text-transform: uppercase; color: #3b220a;]Aphrodi Kura 19 || MALE || HUMAN || PIRATE IDENTIFICATION Full Name: Aphrodi Kura Aliases: "The Phoenix" Aphrodi Sexuality:Heterosexual Date of Birth:30/July Crew: Alignment: Lawful Neutral Zodiac Sign: Leo Personal Jolly Roger:- PERSONALITY POSITIVE TRAITS: Intelligent Calm Reliable Loyal Brave NEGATIVE TRAITS: Carefree Lazy Quick Tempered Reckless Overconfident LIKES: Sleeping Fighting a strong opponent Eating/Drinking Training Reading DISLIKES: People beating up helpless people. Cheaters. Bad food. Cyborgs. Boring people. Marines APPEARANCE Image Link: Link to appearance. Height:181 CM Weight:75 KG Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Black with red. Attire:Aphrodi wears an orange jacket and a red T-shirt underneath it. He also wears a necklace with a feather on it. It is said that it brings him luck. He wears also a tight black jeans with black shoes on. In the winter he wears a white jeans, with a white shirt underneath it. Aphrodi is never seen without his white scarf. Abnormalities: Aphrodi has a tattoo on his right shoulder of a Phoenix. Also one of the traits that you can recognize him as "The Phoenix". BACKGROUND Aphrodi was 5 when he received his first dual sword. Since he was 5 years old he has been training with his father, who was a great swordsman. His father's name was Hiroto. He was training everyday except Friday. That's when he had a day off. When he reached the age of 11, his home was attacked by marines. Of course they were not the real marines, the people who attacked his house were people who stole the clothes of the marine. Of course as being 11 years old, Aphrodi couldn't tell the difference. But when his house was under attack Aphrodi's father was protecting them from the 'marines'. There were like 24 people and they all had weapons. Hiroto was gonna hold them off as there was no way of escaping. He let my mother and I flee, but I couldn't just let my father alone fighting. Aphrodi ran back attempting helping is father. But when he arrived, he saw someone stabbing him from behind. Aphrodi was shocked and couldn't move. He dropped his sword on the ground. His father was getting stabbed and shot from every side, Aphrodi just realized that his father had died before his own eyes and he couldn't do anything. When Aphrodi turned 15 he discovered that his mother was also a swordsman and she was even more skilled than his father. The reason why she didn't help him seems unclear. But Aphrodi gets training from his mother for a year, then Aphrodi felt there is something wrong. Aphrodi felt he was too 'soft'. In order to awake his true powers, Aphrodi had to do something that no one would expect. Even tho Aphrodi always lost from his father he went head on with his mother. Eventually he killed his own mother, then he had a weird feeling. Unable to describe what that feeling was.. Aphrodi didn't shed a single tear during the whole process. When his mother asked why he said "In order to grow stronger." those were his last words to his mother. Aphrodi had broken his swords while dueling his mother so he took her swords. He said on his mothers grave "I'll turn this world up side down" before leaving his mothers grave. After that he hard a hard time surviving, he had no money to rent a room, he didn't had any food or drinks. Aphrodi was still too young to earn enough money to rent a house and buy food. The only solution to survive was to steal, he was stealing from houses, stores and farmers. He kept doing that until he reached 17, when he sneaked in a house he saw a picture of a woman who looked like his mother. He was shocked to see it, then she comes home and sees him. Instead of reporting him she took him in, he adopted him and told him that everything would be alright. The very same day, Aphrodi explains everything what happened. She was surprised that someone like Aphrodi would do that, but she still kept Aphrodi as his foster son. She allowed him to do whatever he wanted if he didn't bring any problems at home at acted like a gentleman. She taught Aphrodi everything he needed to know,slowly he was changing back to how he used to. When he realized it, he didn't care anymore, until she said that Aphrodi would be a great pirate. Then he remembered what he said at his mothers grave. Aphrodi asked if she could assign him to a kendo school. She agreed, she paid for a full year. Aphrodi had a feeling that he wouldn't need to follow lasses anymore so he quit 3 months before the year would end. After that his foster mother asked if he could sit down and talk to him. It was revealed that his real mother and his foster mother are sisters. Aphrodi was quite shocked to hear that. When Aphrodi reached the age of 19, he thanked her for everything she had done for him. After that he made a promise with his aunt that he would become a great pirate. Before he could set sail he needed to pay a last visit to his mothers grave. Aphrodi was sitting in front of her grave, he was remembering those old days and was on the edge of crying but he managed to stop it when he cut his arm. He stood up, and said "I hope we'll meet again, mother." those were his last words before he left his mothers grave. ADDITIONAL INFO PERSONAL DRIVE: Since his mother died ,he has made a promise on her grave. That he'll will become a famous pirate and avenge her death. Until then, he will refuse to die. OFTEN SAID TO BE MOST LIKE: A Phoenix. CHARACTER VOICE: Hideo Ishikawa (Uchiha Itachi's voice actor) OOC NAME: FACE CLAIM:

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[Aphrodi Kura]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, width: 508px; height: 740px; background-image:url('http://i.imgur.com/xvJao.png');] [/style] [style=margin-top: -100px; margin-right: 50px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 20pt; text-align: right; text-transform: uppercase; color: #3b220a;]Aphrodi Kura ABILITIES AND INVENTORY INVENTORY Weapons A dual sword left by his father before he passed away. One is red colored the other is blue. The dual swords are light meaning they nearly weight noting thus making it easier to slash people. They also won't break easy, the swords are mostly on his back crossing an "X". He also wields an other pair of dual swords but those are only used when he's serious. The swords are heavy which makes it nearly impossible for a normal human to carry it without any harsh training. The dual swords are both long and white colored. Aphrodi usually carries it under the two swords. Non-weapons Aphrodi always carries one or two books before he sets a journey. So he won't bore himself while getting there. A necklace with wings on it. (He believes it brings luck) A white scarf ABILITIES Enhanced Strength-

[/u] Training since he was a little boy has made him stronger than average people, since he could wield a heavy dual sword and swing it easily like it didn't weight anything. He was forced to keep training daily because he was on his own now.

[/li][li]Absorbing Knowledge-[/u] Aphrodi has the ability to absorb any kind of knowledge. Mainly because he was reading books a lot. Absorbing any kind information he read, but that could also backfire him. He could not control what he was absorbing, he was absorbing without him knowing.

[/li][li]Immense Endurance-[/u] Going through the harsh training since when he has a kid has build a strong body. That can withstand great deal of damages.
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[Aeon]

• You have so many coding errors in this it's not even funny. There's too many to list so I'd suggest copying visible text only and pasting it into a new copy of the application code.
  
• Your faceclaim code is also entirely wrong. Go look at the faceclaim list to see what sections need to be what.

I'm not even going to touch the rest of the issues until these are fixed.

[Aeon]

• Your faceclaim code still is not formatted correctly. The proper format is in this board's header.
  
• You have no appearance image link. The image also needs to be a mostly full body, not just your icon.
  
• Your cbox name section is set up wrong. Your name goes where the question is at, not next to the section header.
  
• Your thread title should have your character's name in normal capitalization, not all caps like the affiliation.

Fix and resubmit

[Night]

Nope. Grammar's bad, format's still wrong, it's just generally off.