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Post by Red D. Panda on Aug 4, 2011 14:38:43 GMT -6
Name of Character: [/font][/size] Red D. Panda Faction:[/font][/size]Pirate Name of Devil Fruit:[/font][/size]Mera Mera Fruit Type Of Fruit:[/font][/size]Logia Canon or Custom?:[/font][/size] Canon Description:[/font][/size] The Mera Mera no Mi is a Logia type Devil Fruit that allows the user to transform into fire at will as well as create and control it. Reds fire has two diffrent colors. Red and green. The Green being his normal flame showing hes pretty average and happy about things, and red when he removes his eye patch and head band revealing his red eye showing that hes pissed. Thi doesn nothing besides show emotion. Number Of Posts Required:[/font][/size] N/A? Approval:[/font][/size]Leave this blank, it's for the Staff. Strengths of the Fruit:[/font][/size] Strong flame like attacks. Can turn body into fire and create it. Weaknesses of the Fruit:[/font][/size] Weak against water and magama attacks. Cant swim. Ice/smoke against this flame cancel out each other. [/center] |
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Post by Darkwings on Aug 4, 2011 15:54:27 GMT -6
I know I said you can copy pasta from the wiki, but I wasn't expecting you to mention 4Kids and all that. Keep it to a solid description of the fruit, delete some stuff from what the wiki says. I'd copy from the usage section as well as the small description and make it fit your character. As is, it still references Canon.
You forgot to include the "standard devil fruit weaknesses" on your weaknesses.
It doesn't struggle with smoke and ice, they completely cancel each other out.
You might want to reword that one strength "Red epically can condense and compact the flame making it stronger." because that doesn't happen. Condensing and compacting fire does not make it burn more. It puts it out. Put a fire in a small steel box and it will go out quickly. Fire needs air to burn.
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Post by Red D. Panda on Aug 4, 2011 18:10:36 GMT -6
Fixed
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Post by Darkwings on Aug 4, 2011 20:54:58 GMT -6
Include that Ice and Smoke negate it's abilities.
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Post by Red D. Panda on Aug 4, 2011 21:00:01 GMT -6
fixed
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Post by Darkwings on Aug 4, 2011 21:05:28 GMT -6
Accepted, but you require 20 posts and an attainment thread. Post back here when these requirements are met.
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