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Post by Admiral KUROKAMI on Jun 27, 2012 6:41:23 GMT -6
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Full Name: Delacroix Raphel Izanagi.
Aliases:
■ Susanoo, God of the Sea and Storms.
■ Kurokami, Black Wolf.
Sexuality: Heterosexual.
Date of Birth: December 24th.
Crew: N/A.
Alignment: Neutral.
Zodiac Sign: Capricorn.
Personal Jolly Roger: N/A.
PERSONALITY
POSITIVE TRAITS:
NEGATIVE TRAITS:
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
APPEARANCE
Image Link: ADMIRAL.
Height: 6'1 FT.
Weight: 190 LBS.
Hair Color: Blonde.
Eye Color: Light Green & Crystal Blue.
Attire: Marine - Barbarossa's style of dressing is pretty simple but take the appearance of an general. He really doesn't like to wear a lot of fancy clothing, just the kind that gets to show off his body. The size shirts that Barbarossa wears are always a medium sized that tightly grip every ounce of his torso and the top part of his shoulders and are normally black sleeveless collar shirts under his coat. Barbarossa wears a black military coat hich comes down to his thighs. The coat has red lining through out the thing and has two medals on the left breast of the coat. This gives him a general-like but mod day samurai appearance. Around his the left side of his waist is a black and red belt which threaded the free end along the back of his coat, that carries the case of Yamato. In the back, is a brown pouch which carries his small weapons. The type of jeans he may were are straight leg boot cut jeans, in which he only wears in two colors. Those two colors consist of black and blue. He wears black combat boots along with long black finger-less gloves. Time to time, Barbarossa will be seen with a brown traveler's cloak which has a large black cross on each side of the shoulders and in addition to that, it has a hood.
Casual - Susanoo dresses in a black leather bullet-proof vest. The vest sometimes is seen with a shoulder holster that consist of two straps, on his back that carries his two guns. Normally, the size shirts that Susanoo wears are always a medium sized that tightly grip every ounce of his torso and the top part of his shoulders. Most of the times, he will wears a white long sleeve button down shirt. Time to time, he will roll up the sleeves to where they are rolled up to his forearm. His collar every now and again is raised and doesn't wear his famous black bow tie. Susanoo nothing but black slacks. The Admiral wears eyelet-studded dark blue belt, as well as a short second belt with a large silver buckle over his right hip, but left it unfastened and threaded the free end along the back of his slacks. His knife hangs on his second belt. His taste in footwear is simple but elongate thus wearing clean cut, dress boots.
Abnormalities: Despite the Admiral being only twenty-two, the man has a long history and to match that history, his is abnormalities. He has a massive scar stretching from his left shoulder to his left breast, marking the injure that removed his arm and was ultimately replaced with a robotic arm. On his upper left arm, is a TRIBAL CROSS which to him is a symbol of second life and freedom. Finally, there is Susanoo's eyes with his left being light and the right being crystal blue. Though, people don't normally get to see his eyes due to him wearing his blue shades.
BACKGROUND
ADDITIONAL INFO
PERSONAL DRIVE: Revenge.
OOC
NAME: COLONEL.
FACE CLAIM:
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Post by Admiral KUROKAMI on Jun 27, 2012 7:04:51 GMT -6
[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, width: 508px; height: 740px; background-image:url('http://i.imgur.com/xvJao.png');][style=width:100px; height: 100px; margin-top: 60px; margin-left: 40px; border: 6px solid #3b220a; background-image: url(http://i891.photobucket.com/albums/ac113/Onigiri_Iconz/Durarara/Shizuo/27.png); background-position:center; -moz-border-radius: 30px; -webkit-border-radius: 30px; -o-border-radius: 30px;][/style] [style=margin-top: -100px; margin-right: 50px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 20pt; text-align: right; text-transform: uppercase; color: #3b220a;]SUSANOO[/style] [style=margin-left: 125px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 9pt; text-align: center; color: #3b220a;]ABILITIES AND INVENTORY[/style][style=margin-left: 20px; margin-left: 20px; margin-top: 25px; width: 450px; height: 380px; padding: 5px; font-family: Century Gothic; font-size: 8pt; text-align: justify; color: #3b220a; overflow: auto; border: 3px solid #3b220a; -moz-border-radius: 10px; -webkit-border-radius: 10px; -o-border-radius: 10px;]INVENTORY
Weapons
Non-weapons
ABILITIES
RACIAL FEATURES
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Post by Night on Jul 17, 2012 9:52:03 GMT -6
You still don't have a proper Admiral title. Please fix that, then I'll take another look. |
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Post by Night on Jul 20, 2012 22:55:47 GMT -6
There are a few too many major grammatical errors, and the title of the thread is still the wrong title. Fix those, and I'll get to the more nitty-gritty. |
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Post by Admiral KUROKAMI on Aug 21, 2012 7:19:36 GMT -6
Finished mang. Now let my ass rp or else! XD. |
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Post by Aeon on Sept 14, 2012 6:20:13 GMT -6
- The coding errors I told you to fix in skype the last time you posted a notification are still there.
- The list tag around the background needs to be removed as the base app had told you to do.
- You added another blockquote around the OOC section that needs taken out.
- Your CBox name needs to just go where the sentence "What is your cbox name?" instead of leaving it there. Your name also needs removed from the same line as "Name" since that is a title.
- Your faceclaim is not in the proper format as not all the sections are supposed to be in all caps.
Your profile isn't going to get further grading until these issues are fixed.
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